SCRIPT CONSULTING
WHY CHOOSE US?
Ready to Bring Your Screenplay to Life?
At Fever Dream Films, we offer personalised, expert script consultancy to help you achieve your creative vision. Our practical approach is tried and tested, with three produced feature films and a TV pilot for NBC Universal.
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Why Choose Us?
- Our screenplays have been produced with budgets between £100,000 and £10 million
- Films commissioned by major studios like Skydance and NBC Universal
- Funded by BFI, FAW, and screened on Netflix, Amazon Prime, and Apple TV
- Represented by WME, a top talent agency, member of WGA.
- Winners of Best Film BAFTA and British Independent Film Award (BIFA)
- Industry experience as a Script Consultant for TV and BAFTA Jury Member
- Development funds secured from BFI and Film Agency of Wales
- Collaborations with 'It's My Shout,' a premiere scheme for new talent
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Our Proven Process
Our reliable system for developing screenplays has been refined through hundreds of short films, feature films, and thousands of hours in the edit room. Every script receives personal attention and clear, actionable advice tailored to your project.
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Limited Spots Available
Due to the bespoke nature of our consultancy, we only accept a limited number of projects. Interested? Choose a package and send us your story logline (50 words max). Let's turn your vision into a reality.
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Puna & Caradog
SCREENPLAY REWRITE SERVICE
Perfect Your Script for Hollywood Success
Unlock the full potential of your screenplay with my professional rewrite service. With 20 years of experience writing and directing, I've been paid to write for some of Hollywood's biggest studios.
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I will use my experience to ensure your script is perfectly formatted with concise, punchy descriptions and action lines, while preserving your unique story and dialogue. Your screenplay will be as polished as those produced by top studios.
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Let’s make your screenplay shine. Contact us today!
£2,999
SOME OF OUR VALUED PARTNERS & AWARDS
SIX-MONTH MENTORSHIP
Elevate Your Screenwriting with Fever Dream Films' Mentorship Program
At Fever Dream Films, we believe in nurturing talent and helping screenwriters reach their full potential. Our script mentoring program offers an exclusive opportunity to work closely with either Caradog or Puna, experienced industry professionals who will provide personalized guidance and support throughout your screenwriting journey.
Program Highlights:
- 6-month comprehensive mentorship tailored to your needs
- 15 hours of dedicated support (5 hours of meetings + 10 hours of reading and written feedback)
- Flexible meeting options: Connect via Zoom or join us as our guest at the prestigious BAFTA in central London
- Personalized action plan to guide your project from concept to completion
- In-depth, constructive feedback on your scripts through face-to-face meetings and written notes
- Career development advice to help you navigate the industry and achieve your goals
- Freedom to work on existing scripts or embark on a new project
- Potential introductions to development executives and producers, based on your mentor's assessment of your project*
Who Should Apply?
Our mentorship program is designed for ambitious screenwriters working in TV and film who are committed to refining their craft and making a mark in the industry.
Investment:
- Program Total Cost: £1,875
(Monthly payment options available)
By joining our mentorship program, you'll gain the tools, insights, and support necessary to elevate your writing, develop a compelling portfolio, and open doors to new opportunities in the industry.
Take the first step towards transforming your screenwriting career. Apply now for our mentorship program and let Fever Dream Films help you bring your vision to life.
*Please note that introductions to industry professionals are at the mentor's discretion and cannot be guaranteed.
ZOOM CALLS
30 MIN CONSULTATION
CALL
Are you struggling to master the craft, receiving the same negative feedback on your script’s structure, dialogue, characters, and theme? Feeling lost and frustrated, with the will to write but not the way? Juggling work, family, and friends, losing motivation, and caught in a cycle of inactivity? Book a 30-minute consultation with us to get clear, actionable advice and reignite your passion for writing.
£99
1 HR
DEVELOPMENT CALL
Are you a talented writer struggling to create a sellable script? Spent months on your script but still not ready to send it out? We can help you refine your draft and make it industry-ready.
Short on time? Balancing writing with friends and family can be tough. Let us save you time by providing a clear, actionable plan to finalise your script quickly.
Great storyteller but not a screenwriter? Formatting, visual writing, and script structure giving you trouble? We have the expertise to transform your ideas into a polished script.
Book a 1-hour consultation for just £149 and get the professional guidance you need to succeed.
£149
3 X 1 HR
DEVELOPMENT CALLS
Feel like you’ve taken your script as far as you can on your own? Still getting negative feedback and struggling to fix it? Our 3-hour consultation can help you formulate a comprehensive rewrite plan. You'll receive 2 pages of detailed feedback on your current draft (worth £149!) and work through the strengths and weaknesses of your premise, story, structure, and writing. We'll suggest potential improvements to elevate your script to the next level.
The consultation can be split into three calls over the course of your rewrite, providing ongoing support and guidance. Book your session now and transform your script into a standout piece.
£449
LET'S WORK TOGETHER!
SCRIPT COVERAGE
1ST DRAFT
Initial Ten-Page Review
£49
Caradog & Puna will review the first ten pages of your screenplay. Most producers and executives won’t read beyond the first five pages if the script doesn’t grab them. Our feedback will pinpoint common flaws, structural issues, and writing style issues you can improve and apply to the rest of your screenplay. Usually, mistakes in the first ten pages are present throughout the whole draft.
**Bonus:** If your screenplay grabs us and keeps us reading to the end, you’ll get coverage for the entire screenplay at no extra cost!
2ND DRAFT
Full Screenplay Feedback
£149
Receive 2 pages of detailed feedback on your screenplay from Caradog & Puna.
We’ll highlight the strengths and weaknesses of your premise, story, structure, and writing, and suggest potential improvements for your next draft.
Consulting
FINAL DRAFT
Market-Ready Notes
£249
Your feature film or TV pilot script is polished, and you’re ready for 3-5 pages of in-depth, studio-level development notes from Caradog & Puna.
We’ll dive deep into the strengths and weaknesses of your premise, story, structure, and writing, offering detailed suggestions for structural, plot, and character improvements to consider for your next draft.
**Bonus:** If we love your screenplay, with your permission, we’ll introduce you to potential creative partners and financiers.
CHOOSE YOUR COVERAGE PACKAGE:
'1ST DRAFT £49' OR
'2ND DRAFT £149' OR
'FINAL DRAFT £249'
APPLY WITH YOUR LOG-LINE (50 WORD MAX)
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What is a logline?A logline is a concise summary of your screenplay, typically no more than 50 words. It captures the essence of your story, including the main plot, character, and conflict. Don't worry if it's not perfect - we're here to help you refine it!
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Who provides the feedback and rewriting services?All feedback and rewriting are done personally by Caradog. We never outsource any part of our services, and we don't use AI to assess your work. You can trust that you'll receive personalised, human attention throughout the process.
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How do I get started with your services?Getting started is easy! Simply choose the service that best fits your needs and send us your story logline (up to 50 words). We'll review your project promptly and guide you through the next steps. We're here to help you bring your vision to life!
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What are your screenplay length requirements?For the Rewrite and Mentorship schemes, we accept screenplays up to 140 pages. For all other services, the limit is 120 pages. If your screenplay is a bit longer, don't worry - we can still work with you, but an extra charge may apply.
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What is included in the Screenplay Rewrite Service?Our Screenplay Rewrite Service is designed to polish your script to perfection. We'll meticulously rewrite your screenplay, ensuring it is beautifully formatted with concise descriptions and action lines, while preserving the heart of your unique story and dialogue. We're here to help your vision shine!
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How long does the rewrite process take?The rewrite process takes three weeks. During this time, we'll be working diligently to refine your script and bring out its full potential. We understand that waiting can be challenging, but we promise it will be worth it!
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Who is eligible for the Mentorship Program?The program is designed for passionate, dedicated screenwriters who are committed to refining their craft and making a mark in the industry. If you have a strong desire to learn, grow, and succeed, this program is for you!
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What does the Mentorship Program include?Our Mentorship Program is designed to provide you with the support and guidance you need to succeed. Over the course of six months, you'll receive 15 hours of dedicated support (5 hours of meetings + 10 hours of reading and written feedback), personalised action plans, in-depth feedback, career advice, and potential introductions to industry professionals. We're invested in your growth and success!
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Can I pay for the Mentorship Program monthly?Absolutely! We offer monthly payment options for the Mentorship Program to make it more accessible and manageable for you. We understand that investing in your career is a big step, and we want to make it as easy as possible for you.
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What is included in the 1-hour development call?The 1-hour development call is designed to help you take your draft to the next level. You'll receive professional guidance to refine your script, create a clear, actionable plan to rewrite your screenplay, and transform your ideas into a polished, industry-ready piece. We're here to help you bring your vision to life!
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What can I expect from a 30-minute consultation call?In a 30-minute consultation, you'll receive clear, actionable advice to help you overcome any challenges you're facing in your writing process. We'll work together to reignite your passion for screenwriting and get you back on track. You'll leave the call feeling inspired and empowered!
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How are the 3 x 1-hour development calls structured?These calls can be spread out over the course of your rewrite, providing you with ongoing support and guidance. You'll receive detailed feedback on your draft and suggestions for improvements. We're here to support you every step of the way!
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What happens if my screenplay exceeds the page limit for coverage?If your screenplay exceeds the 120-page limit for coverage services, don't worry - we can still help! An extra charge may apply, but we'll work with you to find a solution that fits your needs and budget.
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How long does it take to receive script coverage?We understand that you're eager to receive feedback, so we strive to provide script coverage within three days. We want to help you keep your momentum going and move your project forward!
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What are the different script coverage packages?We offer three coverage packages to suit your needs: - **1st Draft (£49)**: Review of the first ten pages of your screenplay. Perfect for getting early feedback and direction. - **2nd Draft (£149)**: Two pages of detailed feedback on your screenplay. Ideal for refining your script and taking it to the next level. - **Final Draft (£249)**: 3-5 pages of in-depth, studio-level development notes. The ultimate package for polishing your screenplay to perfection.
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How can I contact you?Contacting us is easy! You can reach out through our website by submitting your logline and service request, or directly via our contact email provided on the site. We're always happy to hear from you and answer any questions you may have.
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What if I need more information or have specific questions?We're here for you! If you have any additional questions or need more information about our services, please don't hesitate to reach out. We're passionate about helping screenwriters like you bring your stories to life, and we're always happy to provide guidance and support. Let's work together to make your screenplay the best it can be!