SCRIPT CONSULTING
WHY CHOOSE US?
Ready to Bring Your Screenplay to Life?
At Fever Dream Films, we offer personalised, expert script consultancy to help you achieve your creative vision. Our practical approach is tried and tested, with three produced feature films and a TV pilot for NBC Universal.
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Why Choose Us?
- Our screenplays have been produced with budgets between £100,000 and £10 million
- Films commissioned by major studios like Skydance and NBC Universal
- Funded by BFI, FAW, and screened on Netflix, Amazon Prime, and Apple TV
- Represented by WME, a top talent agency, member of WGA.
- Winners of Best Film BAFTA and British Independent Film Award (BIFA)
- Industry experience as a Script Consultant for TV and BAFTA Jury Member
- Development funds secured from BFI and Film Agency of Wales
- Collaborations with 'It's My Shout,' a premiere scheme for new talent
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Our Proven Process
Our reliable system for developing screenplays has been refined through hundreds of short films, feature films, and thousands of hours in the edit room. Every script receives personal attention and clear, actionable advice tailored to your project.
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Limited Spots Available
Due to the bespoke nature of our consultancy, we only accept a limited number of projects. Interested? Choose a package and send us your story logline (50 words max). Let's turn your vision into a reality.
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Puna & Caradog
SCREENPLAY REWRITE SERVICE
Perfect Your Script for Hollywood Success
Unlock the full potential of your screenplay with my professional rewrite service. With 20 years of experience writing and directing, I've been paid to write for some of Hollywood's biggest studios.
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I will use my experience to ensure your script is perfectly formatted with concise, punchy descriptions and action lines, while preserving your unique story and dialogue. Your screenplay will be as polished as those produced by top studios.
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Let’s make your screenplay shine. Contact us today!
£2,999
SOME OF OUR VALUED PARTNERS & AWARDS
SIX-MONTH MENTORSHIP
Elevate Your Screenwriting with Fever Dream Films' Mentorship Program
At Fever Dream Films, we believe in nurturing talent and helping screenwriters reach their full potential. Our script mentoring program offers an exclusive opportunity to work closely with either Caradog or Puna, experienced industry professionals who will provide personalized guidance and support throughout your screenwriting journey.
Program Highlights:
- 6-month comprehensive mentorship tailored to your needs
- 15 hours of dedicated support (5 hours of meetings + 10 hours of reading and written feedback)
- Flexible meeting options: Connect via Zoom or join us as our guest at the prestigious BAFTA in central London
- Personalized action plan to guide your project from concept to completion
- In-depth, constructive feedback on your scripts through face-to-face meetings and written notes
- Career development advice to help you navigate the industry and achieve your goals
- Freedom to work on existing scripts or embark on a new project
- Potential introductions to development executives and producers, based on your mentor's assessment of your project*
Who Should Apply?
Our mentorship program is designed for ambitious screenwriters working in TV and film who are committed to refining their craft and making a mark in the industry.
Investment:
- Program Total Cost: £1,875
(Monthly payment options available)
By joining our mentorship program, you'll gain the tools, insights, and support necessary to elevate your writing, develop a compelling portfolio, and open doors to new opportunities in the industry.
Take the first step towards transforming your screenwriting career. Apply now for our mentorship program and let Fever Dream Films help you bring your vision to life.
*Please note that introductions to industry professionals are at the mentor's discretion and cannot be guaranteed.
ZOOM CALLS
30 MIN CONSULTATION
CALL
Are you struggling to master the craft, receiving the same negative feedback on your script’s structure, dialogue, characters, and theme? Feeling lost and frustrated, with the will to write but not the way? Juggling work, family, and friends, losing motivation, and caught in a cycle of inactivity? Book a 30-minute consultation with us to get clear, actionable advice and reignite your passion for writing.
£99
1 HR
DEVELOPMENT CALL
Are you a talented writer struggling to create a sellable script? Spent months on your script but still not ready to send it out? We can help you refine your draft and make it industry-ready.
Short on time? Balancing writing with friends and family can be tough. Let us save you time by providing a clear, actionable plan to finalise your script quickly.
Great storyteller but not a screenwriter? Formatting, visual writing, and script structure giving you trouble? We have the expertise to transform your ideas into a polished script.
Book a 1-hour consultation for just £149 and get the professional guidance you need to succeed.
£149
3 X 1 HR
DEVELOPMENT CALLS
Feel like you’ve taken your script as far as you can on your own? Still getting negative feedback and struggling to fix it? Our 3-hour consultation can help you formulate a comprehensive rewrite plan. You'll receive 2 pages of detailed feedback on your current draft (worth £149!) and work through the strengths and weaknesses of your premise, story, structure, and writing. We'll suggest potential improvements to elevate your script to the next level.
The consultation can be split into three calls over the course of your rewrite, providing ongoing support and guidance. Book your session now and transform your script into a standout piece.
£449
LET'S WORK TOGETHER!
SCRIPT COVERAGE
1ST DRAFT
Initial Ten-Page Review
£49
Caradog & Puna will review the first ten pages of your screenplay. Most producers and executives won’t read beyond the first five pages if the script doesn’t grab them. Our feedback will pinpoint common flaws, structural issues, and writing style issues you can improve and apply to the rest of your screenplay. Usually, mistakes in the first ten pages are present throughout the whole draft.
**Bonus:** If your screenplay grabs us and keeps us reading to the end, you’ll get coverage for the entire screenplay at no extra cost!
2ND DRAFT
Full Screenplay Feedback
£149
Receive 2 pages of detailed feedback on your screenplay from Caradog & Puna.
We’ll highlight the strengths and weaknesses of your premise, story, structure, and writing, and suggest potential improvements for your next draft.
Consulting
FINAL DRAFT
Market-Ready Notes
£249
Your feature film or TV pilot script is polished, and you’re ready for 3-5 pages of in-depth, studio-level development notes from Caradog & Puna.
We’ll dive deep into the strengths and weaknesses of your premise, story, structure, and writing, offering detailed suggestions for structural, plot, and character improvements to consider for your next draft.
**Bonus:** If we love your screenplay, with your permission, we’ll introduce you to potential creative partners and financiers.
CHOOSE YOUR COVERAGE PACKAGE:
'1ST DRAFT £49' OR
'2ND DRAFT £149' OR
'FINAL DRAFT £249'
APPLY WITH YOUR LOG-LINE (50 WORD MAX)